"KISS OF LIFE".

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• dew77 (13209)
• [2007-08-10 6:59]

Hello Mario,
Father's feeding her chick,very cute scane.I liked POV,framing and composition a lot.Have a great weekend!
TFS..:-)

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• lovenature (5065)
• [2007-08-10 7:26]

Hi Mario
This is a very touching image of the father sparrow feeding it's young. I love your old barn board birdhouse, the grey colour is natural. It's so nice we still have wildlife in our big city. Well done and interesting note.
TFS Janice
I have to cover my plants tonight it going down to 0C here in Cochrane :(

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• Photoslave (763)
• [2007-08-10 9:13]

Hi Aires,

you catched a very important and sweet moment.

Well done!

Gio

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• elefantino (14381)
• [2007-08-10 10:28]
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The pic is really bad!
Totally out of focus and with a green color overall.

The moment captured is fine...

Andrea

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• ridvan (5196)
• [2007-08-10 11:27]

selam aleykum, excellent shot and very good composition nice pov and bg with splendid colours.good details presented
Well done !
Regards ridvan

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• parthasarathi (1306)
• [2007-08-10 13:15]

Well done.

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• angybone (7672)
• [2007-08-10 16:30]

WOnderful moment!! Beautiful. :)

Thank you for sharing this precious moment with us. That's what I love about photography...we get to share in that wonder. Cool! :)

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• Ken52 (4189)
• [2007-08-10 18:47]

Hi Mario,

Being in the right place at the right time is half of the battle, and you have captured a wonderful moment in nature. You ARE showing some skills. The composition of this photo is perfect.

It is true that the photo has some weaknesses, but I will not be so blunt as another. The focus is a bit soft and blurry. I see that you used a tripod. The camera could have had a slight bump when you took the photo. Do you have a cable release to activate the shutter? I think probably what happened is that the focus was not set quite as sharp as it needed to be.

There is also a slight problem with the color tint. I am not sure what caused that. I am still learning, so I don't know what to suggest.

Mario, you have done very well with your gallery considering the amount of experience you have had. I hope you will continue to practice and I am sure you will improve. The key is to take lots of photos, as many as you can. I still delete about two-thirds of the photos I take.

Have a good weekend... and keep shooting!
Ken

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• haraprasan (17792)
• [2007-08-11 0:26]

Namastay Mario,
Another beautiful capture depicting the first food of a newly hatched in your series. Very nice composition and excellently timed shot. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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• mlines (2870)
• [2007-08-11 3:55]

Hello Mario, A very well timed nature photo. You got this just at the right moment. I like the supporting leg of the large bird. Good colours. TFS. Murray.

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• pablominto (16041)
• [2007-08-11 6:23]

Hello Mario,
A cute situation, my friend, and you capture so well!
Image is well composed with fine details, the little fellow seems so hungry but then they do most of the time in that age...
I have no idea why but there seems to be a slight greenish cast?
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• arfer (0)
• [2007-08-11 19:00]

Hello Mario

A wonderful shot of Dad tending to the young ones.These guys work tirelessly at providing for their progeny.Very good details and DOF.The POV is amazing.Lovely OOF BG.TFS

Rob

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• danbachmann (449)
• [2007-09-02 1:22]

Nice little photo-documentary series you have here. The image could be a little more sharp/vibrant, but it is amazing how tight you have a crop on this image (and most likely because the full size image needed cropped). Good job on framing/cropping.