wild yellow flower II

Critiques [Translate]

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• fragman (17715)
• [2007-04-23 17:03]
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nice Ononis natrix, its a pitty it is cut on top. greetings Ori

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• cedryk (5184)
• [2007-04-23 17:06]
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Hello Juan,
It's a very nice shot for the colours and the close-up, however the DOF is a bit to shallow. Also the framing could be abit more up to include the whole flower. Anyway, amazing details make this contribution very nice.
Best greetings,
Michal

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• nglen (32334)
• [2007-04-23 17:08]

Hi Juan. This is a very good macro shot of the flower. very good colour and fine detail. with a good DOF. TFs well done,
Nick

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• blakitan (5451)
• [2007-04-23 21:08]

Hola Juan,
Imagen muy estética. Colores encantadores. Pozo hecho.

BL

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• Alex99 (18633)
• [2007-04-24 8:53]
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Hi Juan.
You are right. The DOF is shallow a bit. In this case it is necessary to increase the subject distance. DOF will be larger and then to use a crop. However, focus is correct, colour palette is amazing as well as POV. My best wishes and TFS.
Alexei.

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• marmottelolo (14691)
• [2007-04-24 10:28]
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bonjour juan josé
jolies couleur et motifs sur cette fleur,je regrette seulement que vous ayez coupé le haut.
laurent

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• marjan (2641)
• [2007-04-24 12:20]
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hi juan, wonderful shot with exceletn motive and composition.
Marjan

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• SkyF (8127)
• [2007-04-24 16:18]
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Hello Juan Jose,
ah there is this wonderful flower again, this time you used a very shallow DOF. I like this a lot it fdoes give this composition an artistic touch. Very well done.
Sky