From spring to fall

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• Juyona (15669)
• [2006-10-15 9:56]

Hola Fabian, hermosas texturas y excelente trabajo... muchos saludos

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• fartash (5161)
• [2006-10-15 10:00]

Hey Fabian
Beautiful colors and framing,
Excellent work.

Regards
Fartash

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• mikou (5269)
• [2006-10-15 10:43]

Hi Fabian.
Very interesting exhibits detail leafs with fine sharp details.Very nice colours,good work.
TFS and greetings
Milos.

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• reina (2024)
• [2006-10-15 10:50]

Hi Fabian, plain and simple but original. The frame is an excellent choice. Good for the autumn mood. TFS Reina

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• manyee (21078)
• [2006-10-15 12:09]

Hallo Fabian,
First a warm welcome to TN. : )
What a beautiful collage of these four kinds of leaves.
The combination of the different colors is striking.
I am very impressed with the excellent sharpness and exposure of each shot, bringing out the different textures of each leaf.
A fascinating composition.
Danke. : )

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• wallhalla15 (13829)
• [2006-10-15 13:06]

Hallo Fabian
sehr schöne Collage von 3 verschieden Laubbäumen. Technisch sind die 4 Fotos einwandfrei, d.h. sehr gute Schärfe, hohe Detailwiedergabe und natürliche Farben. Evtl. hättest Du die Rahmen der Collage etwas dünner machen können, das ist jedoch Geschmacksache. Anonsten danke für diese sehr gute Arbeit und weiter so.
Gruß
Heinz

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• metcher (4258)
• [2006-10-15 13:07]

Hi, Fabian.
Nice colors. Good texture.

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• HELO (352)
• [2006-10-15 13:12]
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bonsoir
c'est une très bonne idée de nous montrer les couleurs de l'automne mais il me semble que l'impiration vous vient d'ailleur!!!!!!!!
heloise

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• duckpond (323)
• [2006-10-15 13:50]

Well done on this.

The picture really works. It is not easy to build these composite pictures. The colours are nice and rich.

What was your thinking about the order of the colours and the direction of the lines? It would be interesting to know if there are good practise to follow when doing this kind of shot.

Regards and TFS
Johan Swanepoel

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• Hil (5027)
• [2006-10-15 14:40]

Hi Fabian

What a great idea to make a collage of these four leaves to show us all the different colours and textures that we see at this time of year, lovely composition and great framing, I spent ages doing a Collage the other night and managed to lose it all, maybe I will try once again.

TFS Hilary :o)

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• hester (11638)
• [2006-10-15 14:59]

Sorry I got there first - it must be very annoying :-P

I like that you posted yours as well. You can see more of the leaf in yours. Details are excellent and I like the fact you can see the differences in the types of leaf. I'm glad you posted where you got the leaves from

TFS

Karan

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• SunToucher (10183)
• [2006-10-16 3:31]

Hallo Fabian,
Great colors and details and perfect sharpness and composition. A pitty that the red one is slighty less focused the the rest. I like the composition and the idea behind it.
TFS,
Niek

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• peter_stoeckl (10221)
• [2006-10-16 17:27]

Hello Fabian,
good idea, clear concept, well arranged.
Some of the images might take a little bit of sharpening after downsizing. But all over, the composition of different colours and structures looks very interesting. An immediate eye catcher from the thumbnail. Well done, looks good!
With thanks, and best regards,
Peter

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• flagman (2396)
• [2006-10-23 10:23]

A very nice idea for a post. We often see landscapes with similar scenes, but not close-ups. The autumn photo is a little blurred, but apart from that, it's a great post.

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• red45 (30243)
• [2006-10-25 14:00]
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Hello Fabian!

Looks like we've got similiar ideas to celebrate autumn :-) Very good collage with typical colours for this season. I like composition but I think it could be better to find fourth [brown] leaf with central, horizontal vein. Anyway - very good work.

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• mario-roberto (2627)
• [2006-10-25 16:08]

dear fabian,
it was an honour to have a critique by a boy af your age.

it's amazing that you learn about nature. follow ever this way. you learn also what the world can give us.

this is what I say to my sons.

gooooooooooooood work boy!!!

TFS mario

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• crousti4053 (10)
• [2006-10-30 10:50]

Hello Fabian,
very good idea to compare differents leafs, the colors are good, it's very original...congratulations !

Laurent

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• cosmln (1952)
• [2006-11-03 16:40]
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Hi Fabian,

i like a lot this composition.
interesting subject and a good ideea to put all that togheter.
TFS,
cosmln